Two Young Brides

Two young brides in the family album
embraced new wifehood at twenty-two.

In gossamer gowns on their blessed days,
in rituals of womanly blossoming,
they walked towards wifely happiness,
caring for husbands, raising their children,
all well loved in their homes.

Two young brides born across new thresholds
found a stern code of law in their homes:
wives and children grimly ruled,
daily obeying their breadwinner.

Two young brides in the family album
sixty three years apart.

One young bride, hre own art extinguished,
burnt his art in glaring flames
on his final funeral pyre.
Her release was quiet widowhood
in her home now untroubled
by the breadwinner’s ice cold demands.

The other young bride found
release in departing,
joining her teenagers’ exodus.
She made a new home,
new kitchen, new garden,
which grew in time to
swarm with children, grandchildren,
and a cheerful husband
flipping steaks on the barbecue,
filled up wine glass in hand.


Previously posted February 2016

Two Young Brides

3 thoughts on “Two Young Brides

    1. I haven’t written much for a while lately, We keep having upheavals in the family – one Mum with three children keeps on having physical / health disasters and needing help for the kids and sole breadwinner Dad. All senior relatives needed on hand. I need to get my routines for notes and drafts going again somehow.

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